Comments on: Keeping Your Marriage and Its Blanket of Love

By: tillermantony

tillermantony — Fri, 19 Feb 2010 16:31:59 +0000

When mrs Clint puts her poem beside mr Clints it will be a marriage poem…….until then it remains a bachelors dream of marriage, alas Clint, divorce is not marriage, and not a certainty of marriage. Would you invest murpheys law into your sincerety that heaven must pause while one person projects their fears into the future.
Why take love to a dead end? There is life in your words and clearly love in your life. With this divorce is not an option
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By: lilrunt12001

lilrunt12001 — Fri, 19 Feb 2010 16:29:59 +0000

I like it
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By: j_smith_7

j_smith_7 — Fri, 19 Feb 2010 16:27:59 +0000

University Prof of Literature here (and many times a published author on Modern 20th Century Verse).

Thanks for this – the sentiments are clear.

But, Sir, this is NOT poetry, it is prose. In fact, it’s a list.

It would be better on a teacloth than in a book of poetry.

Good luck to you and your wife.
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By: melissa_froggies

melissa_froggies — Fri, 19 Feb 2010 16:25:59 +0000

Awesome,I loved it ,sounds like it came straight from the heart.you should go to poems.com and post it ,it might be published in a book of poetry someday.Good luck God bless:O)
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By: asherdaire

asherdaire — Fri, 19 Feb 2010 16:23:59 +0000

um, a whole lot negative in there. not exactly what people want to hear at (or associate with) their wedding.
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By: Remedy

Remedy — Fri, 19 Feb 2010 11:21:11 +0000

A Marriage poem what do you think about it state oppinion?
Marriage by: Clint
Men Love your wife for her love is like water "life giving to the soul"
Women Love your husband for he is your shield and blanket that keep you warm and from harm.
Do not put fame over love, for those who give up the ones they love for fame. in theend money is all they will have, and whart good is money and riches without anyone to share them with.
Women If you Feel your Husband is lacking something Plea with him, do not take it in your hands to correct it. Men trust your wives for they are the bread that keep you alive.
When divorce seems to be the only opition none should point fingers in blame.
for you both are at fault. and share the same amount of shame.
Men if you are troubled by something your wife does make hast to speak to her, for she may not know how you feel.
Sex is beautiful when it is between a Husband and Wife, but it is foolish to have it often for, addiction is evil and will tear up a relationship for anything that is excessive is bad